PRACTICE 15: FUNNEL AND DESCRIPTIVE LEADS

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 Brainstorming

1. It can be exhausting for them, being in class all day.

2. Maybe it not going to help them in the future (a subject)

3. Not sports, so maybe no motivation to go to school.

4. The day shouldn't be longer

5. School days should not be longer because they are going to be exhausted, they will not have motivation, they are wasting time in some subject that they are not going to need in their future.

Your introductory paragraph goes on the lines below:

It is being considered that students spend more time in the classroom, but is this the best for them? If they spend all their morning in class, their motivation will go down, and if on top of that this action causes their extra-school activities, such as sports, to be eliminated, they will make their desire to go to school disappear; also they will be too tired that the last thing they will do will be to study.

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