PRACTICE 7: DESCRIPTIVE PARAGRAPH
1. prewriting process
what is your thought about the empty streets?
Gives me a feeling of freedom and sadness.
do you feel anxious about this photo?
Not really.
it is a good feeling?
It's a weird feeling between happiness for the empty streets and sadness because of the reason why they are empty.
does that feeling make you want to go to Madrid?
Yes, because I know it's not like that anymore.
emotion: happiness
topic: streets in Madrid
topic sentences: this photograph of the gran via gives me a vibe of freedom.
SUPPORTIVE SENTENCE: DESCRIBE THE FEELING
descriptive paragraph:
This photograph of the Gran Via gives me a vibe of freedom. When you are in this type of street some people feel vulnerable because they are used to hiding behind the crowded streets to feel safe, but I get a completely different feeling. Nevertheless, we have to think about the situation in which this type of scenario occurred, we have to remember ourselves, alone, by ourselves facing a new and unknown moment in our lives. So, maybe that is why I have mixed feelings because this famous street in Madrid is very complicated to be pictured this way. In conclusion, this picture is a complicated one and I can't think of only one feeling, but the one that I feel stronger is the freedom one.
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