PRÁCTICAS DE REDACCIÓN

WRITING MY FIRST OUTLINE Globalization thesis statement: We live in a society where everything has to be available for everyone as soon as possible, and globalization is our best weapon. I. More chance to get anything for any country.  A) Brands will make more money B) Cheaper for us. II. Languages A) More job opportunities B) Get to learn more languages. III. More options in any situation. (help from other countries) A) The independence of some countries B) More support in dangerous situations such as diplomatic problems, coups, etc.

 Brainstorming 1. It can be exhausting for them, being in class all day. 2. Maybe it not going to help them in the future (a subject) 3. Not sports, so maybe no motivation to go to school. 4. The day shouldn't be longer 5. School days should not be longer because they are going to be exhausted, they will not have motivation, they are wasting time in some subject that they are not going to need in their future. Your introductory paragraph goes on the lines below: It is being considered that students spend more time in the classroom, but is this the best for them? If they spend all their morning in class, their motivation will go down, and if on top of that this action causes their extra-school activities, such as sports, to be eliminated, they will make their desire to go to school disappear; also they will be too tired that the last thing they will do will be to study.